I think your pronunciation is good enough to be understood by any English people at any conversation you'll have. The only thing you have to improve is your behaveour before the webcam when you're talking to and not be nervous as if you had fear to…
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Sorry to take so long to respond. Your pronunciation is almost perfect. You are speaking with a North American accent. That is OK unless you want a different one. I could find very few words that needed improvement
Brazilians Bra-zíl-i-ans. You left out the second i and the s.