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mas detalhes eu posso enviar para o seu e-mail...ok
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My name is miss favour, i saw your profile today and became interested in you, i will also like to know more about you, and i want you to send an mail to my email address so that i can give you my picture for you to know whom l am. Here is my email address (favourlove00@yahoo.co.uk). i believe we can move from here. I am waiting for your mail to my email address above. Remeber that distance or colour does not matter but love matters alot in life please send me mail to my e mail address. Please reply me with my email address here.
(favourlove00@yahoo.co.uk)
Desculpa mais estava de férias no Brasil, então deixei de lado o ingles. Bom ja estou de volta , devo ficar aqui na Jamaica até o final do ano, a partir de hoje tentarei me corresponder em ingles.Quem qiser saber um pouquinho da cultura Jamaicana pode me perguntar que responderei com prazer.
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Às 23:02 em 23 dezembro 2007, eden sorupia disse...
Oi Henrique, eu escrivo duas vezes para você. Eu o contarei sobre mim: eu 34 anos. Eu sou Filipina e vivo na Australia por 4 anos. Eu estudo para doutorado na Universidade do Melbourne. Eu viajarei minha pais em Março. Eu sou planejador e arquiteto. Eu sou soltera mas com muito amigos e amigas. Eu jogo badminton (piteka) e tênis. Eu gosto de ver cinema e escuchar classical/jazz music, muito gosto bossa nova.
quereria saudá-lo um natal feliz! abraços. cuide-se.
Às 22:49 em 23 dezembro 2007, eden sorupia disse...
ola henrique. obrigada. you write well but i will correct two of your sentences:
1) "write me in its language" should be "write me in your language" --> i'm assuming that you mean i should write in english. the use of "it(s)" is usually for inanimate objects.
2) "speak about you" --> normally you say, "write more about yourself" or "tell me more about yourself"
3) "i like to do new friends" can be scandalous! :) it would sound better if you wrote "i like to meet new friends."
4) "i would like a lot to be its friend" --> again your use of "its" rather than other pronouns such as "your," "his", "her." re-writing and re-phrasing your sentence it goes: "i would like to be your friend."
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mas detalhes eu posso enviar para o seu e-mail...ok
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My name is miss favour, i saw your profile today and became interested in you, i will also like to know more about you, and i want you to send an mail to my email address so that i can give you my picture for you to know whom l am. Here is my email address (favourlove00@yahoo.co.uk). i believe we can move from here. I am waiting for your mail to my email address above. Remeber that distance or colour does not matter but love matters alot in life please send me mail to my e mail address. Please reply me with my email address here.
(favourlove00@yahoo.co.uk)
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quereria saudá-lo um natal feliz! abraços. cuide-se.
1) "write me in its language" should be "write me in your language" --> i'm assuming that you mean i should write in english. the use of "it(s)" is usually for inanimate objects.
2) "speak about you" --> normally you say, "write more about yourself" or "tell me more about yourself"
3) "i like to do new friends" can be scandalous! :) it would sound better if you wrote "i like to meet new friends."
4) "i would like a lot to be its friend" --> again your use of "its" rather than other pronouns such as "your," "his", "her." re-writing and re-phrasing your sentence it goes: "i would like to be your friend."
i hope you understood what i meant.
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